Sunday, November 15, 2015

The day we fell of the motorcyle

It was a hot, sunny Sunday morning on March. I was still sleeping.
"Wake up!" my mother yelled. I didn't listened to her and went back to sleep since it was still early and it was Sunday, so there was no school that day. "Paulina wake up!We are going to the ranch of a friend. Do you want to come with us or are you staying at home alone?" As she was saying this I started waking up since I hate staying alone in my house because I am scared someone will kidnap me.

"I am going." I say. I slowly wake up and change, then invite Daniela Duco to the ranch because my mother let me invite a friend. We arrived to the ranch and the first thing we do is to say Hello to everyone. While we were saying hi to everyone I met a girl who was our age and we invited her to come with us.After she got in a motorcycle and Duco and me got on another motorcycle. 
"Follow me." the girl that we had just met told us. I was driving the other motorcycle and I was starting to increase the speed. For a while we were following her and driving in the ranch. After I got the great idea of going another way. We could either follow my friend in her motorcycle or turn right and go to another different place(Out of the ranch).I turned right. My friend could not follow us in her motorcycle because there were walls beside her so she needed to go around the whole ranch to go where we were. I was increasing the speed, I could feel the air on my face and my hair moving. After,I got scared because we are outside the ranch and a man was there. I tried to make a turn but the motorcycle was going too fast so the motorcycle turned. While it was turning I saw everything in slow motion. 
The motorcycle was all upside down and my legs were below the motorcycle.I got very scared when I saw the motorcycle on top of me. Then I realized my legs were beneath the seat of the motorcycle, so luckily there was space for my legs. The only thing that hurt was my knee but very little, I was mostly scared because the motorcycle was on top of me. (But not really putting any weight on me)Then I told Duco to help me move the motorcycle, then she tried but couldn't so I moved from below the motorcycle and stood up. When I was standing up I saw my hands were full of blood and I was scared to wash them with water and soap because I thought it would hurt, but actually when I washed them I did not feel anything at all. I do not know why but I even touched the cuts and they did not hurt, I actually did not feel anything ,as if they were numb. 
After the man that was outside the ranch turned out to be a worker from the ranch so he helped us turn the motorcycle since it was turned around. After we tried to turn on the motorcycle and it did not work, while we were trying this my friend came. We explained her everything and after her dad made the motorcycle work and we went driving in them again, but I was still a little scared and I drove carefully.

4 comments:

  1. I like your blog, but maybe you can add more details on the way you felt on the moment when you were going on the motorcycle.

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  2. I like your blog, but maybe you can add more details on the way you felt on the moment when you were going on the motorcycle.

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  3. I like that you put me in your writing but maybe make the letter a little bigger so its easier for the reader and write in third person

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  4. I like your post, I found some grammatical mistakes, in verb tenses mostly. Fix those and make the font bigger and your post will be great!

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